Bitter Tragedy

Bitter tragedy
wounded so deep
suicidal thoughts
tend to keep
burning hot temper
tricks and treats deceive me
loss to be i truly seek

Conflict of mind where to turn
cobwebs of cold
constricting my sight
dwelling in this place
I do not fight

Never again
will this joyful play take place
bitter tragedy Is what I pray
loosing grip, I let go
listening to the reaper say my name
taunting me to come and play
bitter tragedy for mine to keep
awaking not
For in death i sleep

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

Deep, dark and intense.. excellent write.. :) xx

[moonlily]

It's very nice! I like the darkness in it.

[rwar ish me]

very nice, dark and deep. love it

[J Todd Underhill]

Loved the last line, I have always lived my life as if I will catch up on my sleep within death. It's what is needed to embrace this life we are leading. It's no secret I like the darker side of life, and your write takes me there. Bravo!

[Sleepless]

love it !!!!! this is amzing !:) i like ths mood of this poem and the ending its awesome !:)

[Larry Dyson]

much deeper than the surface...

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Dark and very relatable!

[Raven Starhawk]

It speaks to me in ways of vivid lore that weaves astounding care around me senses. I am indulging in your words as though they were candy kisses. Well penned.

[LinBin]

raw and well versed, deep....well done x

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A fine write that exposes the dark thoughts superbly!!!