Passage

Wisdom of the dark light
beckons at my door, yearning to go deeper
I thirst for more

Traveling up the decaying steps
along the cold mountain side
bringing me closer

Wicked thoughts take up play
renewing me before i leave
Dark angels fly over head
taunting me

Many faces to engage
as I eat the nectar sweet
For wisdom of the dark light
has taken me

I embrace the lore
that entrances me
I stand on the mountain top
and leap out

I can feel my passage of birth
as my wings expand far
I have taken on new form
as the wisdom of the dark light
Endures

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

May be a rough draft but I see much promise in this piece, keep working it and polishing it, because this gem is going to shine!

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This is amazing! I really like for just a rough draft,
This is really wonderful...awesome write.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Very well written!! I love the imagery here. Your words make the reader paint the scenery in our minds. =) Nicely done! i like the darkness of this piece. Great write!

[stars are far]

great one :)

[Brad]

rough draft hell? i would leave it as is...your expressions are vivid

[MissAngelica]

This is incredibly well written, and powerful :)

[K.C. Zbryk]

Very vivid the words that you choose bring this piece to life in the mind of the reader. The dark does have an alluring aspect to it and i cant wait to see how it influences you from here. Great write