The Kiss

Darkened dreams haunting me to awake,
battles are fierce pulling the web of dark life.
No light to flicker as quiet thoughts unravel me,
deceit plays, a heart of time.
Images move swift and shadows dance in my name.
I am awakened, the kiss of breath be mine.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

as quiet thoughts unravel me ~ I love the complicated simplicity of these words, for all can read and find a different perspective in it's meaning, I myself know that my insomnia only worsens my dark days as when i should be resting I am too busy re running the day and worrying about it. You penned a beautiful ending that makes one sigh. keep em' coming

[Megan Step]

Your wonderful poems remind me of ancient verses of Renaissance scripture (if that makes any sense). It is very hard to describe, but you are an amazing poet, though I do not fancy reading poems, I do enjoy reading yours. They would be prefect for a prologe to a twisted fairytale or gothic literature.

I could read your work for hours.

[Jibey]

The kiss of breath - a good play in a poem that expresses dark dreams and longings

[J Todd Underhill]

A dark and wonderfully done write. I enjoyed.

[Stef Outsiders]

This is dark and dreamy... I like.. well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. In my dreams. Seem like I'm fighting someone always. Dreams are the doorway to life. Bad dreams mean too much stress and need time to relax and think. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

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Love this write, love the imagery, well written.

[Jeremy Baker]

Dark picture of our hidden reality - Nice structure and vivid imagery as well. Great write!