quick lovers

Happy Valentine's day

we know the danger

of kissing a stranger

but it seems fun

whats done is done

he says it was just a fling 

you have no control over a thing

they break our hearts 

as we are torn apart 

soon he comes back 

with a knack

for his charm

and i have fallen under his spell

he is swell

then we fall 

we crawl

and rebuild our relationship

with a kiss on the lips.

Author's Note

Happy Valentine's day

Reviews

[matrixmark]

The way in which it started off, I though I was going to be reading a poem about a one night stand. But then it turned into what I felt was a certain control someone has over another person.
The line of fallen under his spell summoned it up quite a bit for me. To fall under someones spell tells me that the other person is a bit of a manipulator and can come and go as he/she pleases, unless of course the person realises that they truly made a mistake and beg for forgiveness.
This was a good piece, had me thinking in different ways.

So in my opinion, to sum it up....thought provoking.

Mark.

[Coyote Poetry]

The kisses of strangers? The kiss is under-rated. With old age. We remember the kisses and the kind faces. I liked this poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[APOORVA]

wow!
a different and fresh perspective of love.
well written

[Danie]

Very lovely poem about things a lot of people go through. I like how you ended it "with a kiss on the lips", showing just how easy it is to fall under that spell again