The accident

The accident

A Poem by DarkArtz 0703
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My mum was recently in an accident that killed three people... One of which was my uncle... This is about him

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Where have you gone?
Your forever on my mind.
Why can't I hear you?.
Echoes of your voice remains.
Why cant I feel you?
One last hug before you go?
Why can't you see me?
I'm standing right here.
Why can't you hear me?
I'm talking to you now
Why can't you feel me?.
I'm trying so hard.
Why can't we hang out anymore?
I'm all alone... Where have you gone?
Why can't they forgive me?
It wasn't my fault ive done nothing wrong.
Why can't I say I'm sorry?
Sorry for the pain..
Why toothless? Why did you got for the ride?
Why did it have to be you... That died... I can't express my pain... I can't express my grief.... Why does heaven have to be so far away?
Why does hell feel so similar to today...

© 2020 DarkArtz 0703


Author's Note

DarkArtz 0703
Please take it easy

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There are of course tragedies and then, there are those far more than that .. this feels very much like one of the latter .. and sadly, decent poetry is so often built on the back of them .. Neville

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Months Ago


it seems you have had more than your fair share of tragedies .. I hope life is now being kin.. read more
DarkArtz 0703

8 Months Ago

I have it better then others and I'm grateful for that. My son makes my world so much brighter no ma.. read more
Neville

8 Months Ago


I shall keep my fingers crossed for you both🤞
A very open and raw description of a tragedy felt deep inside. I am sorry for your pain and hope you find the answers your looking for.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sad and touching, you wrote it so beautiful and honest
I feel sad for your mom too , its awful , hope she can work it out and you as well

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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DarkArtz 0703
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