blood of my blood

we kill

our words like knives

poisoned and ill 

we suffer all our lives 

the mental abuse drums in thy head

the suicidal wishes of death

all cause from thy demons

blood of my blood and those before

this land was untouched 

but thy crimson love and broken law

the practice of hate jealousy and rage

the abused accused and caged 

the sick madness of humanity

the falseness of saints

thy fear of poisoned clarity 

and  thy fear of crimson fates 

goodbye my love my sickness and health

blood of my blood tarnished by wealth 

Author's Note

draft maybe

Reviews

[Serendipity Planet]

It's good , made me thing
Can we change what we heritage in our blood , or we should keep going

Thank you

[Lykos]

Brilliant poem, love the rhyming. Well done!!!

[emipoemi]

This def has potential. Some musicality tweaks, maybe, and a different word for one of the "crimson"'s, for they undermine each other. But everything else is stupendous and that echo of an ending - brilliant! Well done!