harsh judgement...

my first poem after moving away from my emotionally verbally and pysically abusive mother..

 It is like actual hell

living with your demon

the poison that begins to swell

but my final demon..my mum

she was my last demon and oh I know

how this seems so pathetic and sad

how everything I'm about to say

will be judged harsh

but not as badly as each day

my mother weld me fast

to make sure I didn't get away

but here I am.. today

I finally did it.. thanks to a foster home

ill be here till my eighteenth 

and then I'm on my own

now the love from underneath 

can finally show itself to you

ill take away my mask of pain and bare to you the truth

Author's Note

I just wrote this be gentle…..

Reviews

[Serendipity Planet]

Very brave and emotional words
I am happy you are in a better place after this hell

[Lykos]

We're always fighting some sort of demon, sometimes inside ourselves. Great piece.