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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
harsh judgement...

harsh judgement...

A Poem by DarkArtz 0703
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my first poem after moving away from my emotionally verbally and pysically abusive mother..

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 It is like actual hell
living with your demon
the poison that begins to swell
but my final demon..my mum
she was my last demon and oh I know
how this seems so pathetic and sad

how everything I'm about to say
will be judged harsh
but not as badly as each day
my mother weld me fast
to make sure I didn't get away
but here I am.. today

I finally did it.. thanks to a foster home
ill be here till my eighteenth 
and then I'm on my own
now the love from underneath 
can finally show itself to you
ill take away my mask of pain and bare to you the truth

© 2019 DarkArtz 0703


Author's Note

DarkArtz 0703
I just wrote this be gentle…..

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Very brave and emotional words
I am happy you are in a better place after this hell

Posted 4 Years Ago


We're always fighting some sort of demon, sometimes inside ourselves. Great piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on January 29, 2019
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DarkArtz 0703
DarkArtz 0703

Australia



About
people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. Mother of two boys one in heaven and the other with me more..

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A Poem by DarkArtz 0703