wont get enough

wont get enough

A Poem by DarkArtz 0703
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my every day

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Walking into class

All eye's on me

They see scars from the glass

Just leave me be


THEY PUSH AND PUSH, WONT GET ENOUGH

I TRY TO COPE BUT TIMES ARE TOUGH


I hear every word from her

Head of the class she is all talk

But every word still hurts

They push me, trip me up when I walk



THEY PUSH AND PUSH, WONT GET ENOUGH

I TRY TO COPE BUT TIMES ARE TOUGH

© 2017 DarkArtz 0703


Author's Note

DarkArtz 0703
school

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I'm almost certain you're wanting "scars" not "scares", but other than that, Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can definitely relate. People can be so cruel especially in high school.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

reading it reminds me of a metal song, but i like the way you bold the letters. It brings it out more

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was great. Completely relatable. Well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 0703

7 Years Ago

thank you for your kind review
I liked the construction of the poem and how it gets you to connect immediately.Good work

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 0703

7 Years Ago

thank you for your review
Sure, tough times one becomes extremely sensitive to surroundings.....

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 0703

7 Years Ago

thank you for the review

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Added on September 6, 2017
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DarkArtz 0703
DarkArtz 0703

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About
people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. Mother of two boys one in heaven and the other with me more..

Writing
You You

A Poem by DarkArtz 0703