the boy in the book

your a numbing lover,

a single fish in the sea,

you know you can not have her

you know it can not be

and still you run the race

feeling like your stuck in space

every second your near her

you make yourself free

every second a numbing hurt

because you can not be

you sit and gaze at her face

and watch her move with such grace

you feel alone with her by your side

she doesn't see how she kills you

she gets you high and low like the tide

and she says three words that isn't true

it's a painful thing

being just another numbing lover

Author's Note

not sure how I feel about this one but please tell me if you like/hate it

Reviews

[emipoemi]

You have some grammatical errors here and there, the major one being "....three words that AREN'T true" (because "words" is plural). But apart from that this is very well written, and very poetic. Well done!

[Arcus]

I really like this one. It has a good flow and conveys its imagery well.

[DarkArtz 0703]

thanks Arcus for the review

[Arcus]

Of course! I'll be reading more. :)