EVERY....

my first ever poem to be honest

Every second you sit there

Is another I want her gone

The way I feel it's not fair

You got my hart all ripped an torn

Every time you say her name

Is another I die inside

Love what a sick game

You get me high and low like a tide

Every day you hold her tight

I get upset cause you were mine

I sleep all day and cry all night

But baby if you ask I'm doing just fine

Every month that same day

I sit and flash back

To every word you used to say

wishing my heart beat line was Flat

Author's Note

the first poem I ever did
tell me the truth .... what do you think

Reviews

[AcasualPawn]

Jealous and possesive love.................
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Good work keep it on

[DarkArtz 0703]

my first break up actually but good guess....

[AcasualPawn]

Dont worry there are ton of guys to select...

[DarkArtz 0703]

yeah I know but out of the ton there is only one I want lol

[AcasualPawn]

Well i don't get it, i like more than one girl......

[DarkArtz 0703]

that poem was written two years ago I've moved on from him lol

I've fallen for many guys but now theres only one I wan with me

[AcasualPawn]

Well best wishes

[DarkArtz 0703]

thanks you too

[AcasualPawn]

No problem my old friend darkartz

[DarkArtz 0703]

hahaha good luck