why

why

A Story by DarkArtz 0703
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sad

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Alone once again she sits in the dark.

Nobody to care and nobody to tell her its okay.

she feels like everything that ever happened to her was fake.

Did I ever mean a thing? Did he even care about my heart? Why did I say anything?

the thoughts roll through her head.

She re-reads the note and starts to cry.

"Goodbye, I'm sorry if this hurts anyone"

the last time anyone ever heard from Max.

All she has ever known is gone.

the love of her life missing.


Like a forgotten tune.

© 2017 DarkArtz 0703


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DarkArtz 0703
first story thoughts please

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Cy!
That's all Max wrote! What a jerk. At least a explanation would be nice.

But to leave someone there to think:

"Is this my fault?"
"Is it something I did?"

That is just cruel.

Nice work by the way. I could feel the characters emotions.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 0703

7 Years Ago

thank you... im thinking I might continue on the story



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Wow, very nice. I enjoyed it. I could feel the frustration and the sorrow. Also makes me annoyed at this Max person. It's not okay to just vanish from someone's life like that, it would hurt more than if they just told face-to-face, "I don't love you anymore" because it makes you feel like it's your fault or something.
Anyways, I loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 0703

7 Years Ago

I may continue I want to write a story about Jessie that's the girl.... thinking maybe max could be .. read more
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Cy!
That's all Max wrote! What a jerk. At least a explanation would be nice.

But to leave someone there to think:

"Is this my fault?"
"Is it something I did?"

That is just cruel.

Nice work by the way. I could feel the characters emotions.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 0703

7 Years Ago

thank you... im thinking I might continue on the story
Time for a new START! That Max guy was worthless anyhow.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 0703

7 Years Ago

hahaha your funny thanks for the review
I written something like this yesterday,,,, but different...
Well its love always.....
Nice read..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 0703

7 Years Ago

thank you very much

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people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. Mother of two boys one in heaven and the other with me more..

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