Hurry Up Time

Time, you just have to hurry,

I hate this pain of everyday.

The things that happen,

Hurt me in every way.

Hurry oh hurry,

Time oh please,

Please just do it,

Time, do it for me.

Time hurry,

Do something I beg of you,

Please just do it,

Do it for all i've been through.

Go faster and faster,

staying here makes me cry,

Just speed up,

Take me somewhere high.

Just hurry and go,

I hate them.. yes hate,

Oh so much,

Hurry and move time before its too late.

So time,

let's go,

we'll hurry,

Lets ditch that hoe.

Reviews

[No name]

Oh Jess... I really like this piece and it says so much knowing you and hearing your story. Time can heal but it's never quick and really that can sometimes make more pain. Love ya, know we care. LOL

[nenestarrs]

The beginning captivated me. The part that goes: "I hate this pain of everyday. The things that happen, Hurt me in every way." and "Do something I beg of you, Please just do it, Do it for all I've been through."

Time can heal all things or at least make it easier to get through, which I believe is part of what you are saying or wanting. You express yourself well. I felt for a moment that I needed time to hurry up.