Door's

I feel trapped in a cruel world,

Stuck in a room without a door.

My life's been taken been whirled,

It's all I had! I never wanted more.

I'm stuck inside and I can"t get out.

I hollar for help but no one comes.

In this empty cold room I start to walk about,

I ponder about what life finally becomes.

I start to become weak and sit on the cold hard ground,

I start to cry and weep.

The thought comes to reality of not being found.

I look to my left and see someone dead asleep.

I think to myself if their were trapped too,

Maybe they fell for the lies like me,

maybe their life was crazy as a zoo.

This person awakens and gives me a key.

The person said take it ask no questions,

So I took it and searched all about.

I wish before left i asked for some suggestions.

Then I stop! I see two door's without a doubt.

One was dark, it could end it all, it was death.

It looked good. It had a "WELCOME" matt,

I look again and see another sign "take a breath"

I guess that sign was back to life. I couldn't make a decision like that.

I thought about, death will end all miserys,

 All I just had to do is unlock it with the key.

I thought it would be an easy victory.

But then it came to mind that ill never see.

I'm torn between the two,

death ends it all,

but then i'd miss a few

I just hit that wall!

What do I do?

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i really like this poem and how much emotion you put in it...it says a lot about how we trust to easily and then are faced with the consequences...also how we have to make some really difficult decisions but don't always know whats best...but you have a few grammar errors...but overall AMAZING job!!!!

[TawnyBlueStar]

this is great. very interesting :D
If only the decision also involved some certain ruby slippers XD
the decision seems so hard. i like :)
reminds me of the heaven and hell game :)
love it

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. I like the desire to escape and the description of the prison with door that are locked. You went in may directions with this poem. I believe death isn't a good door. It will come soon enough. I believe we must be like Alice in Wonderland. Tap our shoes and escape the damn prison.
"I'm torn between the two,
death ends it all,
but then i'd miss a few'
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Crow]

Profoundly elegant, I love the poetic imagery of the choices life offers us.

Well penned!

[paradise]

You make me want to start crying I find myself asking this questioon too many times I know all the emotion you are feeling in this poem I love every second of it I think it is ur best so far it has soo much flow with it and I love the way it was put together,It just has soo much beauty to it I love it so much. This has to go to favourites!

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

koool