Failed

I've lost the game,

and thing's are now a change.

I lost and failed,

I got caught and now i'm nailed.

I've never been such an epic fail,

It's worse than that time that I tripped and fell over the rail.

Oh No! Im almost out of live's!

"Stop! Don't look!" I yell, but all I see is eye's.

Now i'm cold and alone,

Im lost and in my own depressing zone.

Im a fail like my broken love,

My thought's are now spoken above.

Ok Go! I know!

You don't have to make a big show.

I know i'm a fail, just leave,

I know and I know you don't believe.

I know i'm a fail,

now my next stop is jail..

~Dark Dancer

Author's Note

What do you think??

Reviews

[Crow]

I keep hearing this line in my head: "Now i'm cold and alone"; life has a strange way sometimes.

[Immortal Phantom]

everyone fails sometimes but that doesn't mean anyone is a failure. it just means you've learned

[dreaming dame]

:) I think you aren't a fail. :) This poem, though spoken about a fail, was written into a great success. :) Nice write.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

its a good write...i didnt know you had so my passion for writing

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

Thanks (:

[ATG]

Very interesting poem. It flowed well and the rhyming of words helped show message of failure. A great poem.