Invisible

Am I really that invisible to you?

After all we've been through.

You ignore me like an adults shadow,

I wanted you to love me like a child in snow.

Stop acting like i'm invisible,

all that does is make me more tearful!

When we were first paired,

that's when I felt cared. 

And then you made me feel ignored,

Stop this game of your's i'm getting bored!

Go ahead close the door,

You just made the invisible more. 

You ignore me me oh so much,

why do you do as such?

Now it's time for me to get colour,

Time for yours to be duller. 

Im done with being ignored,

Im out in the world and looking for more.

~ Dark Dancer

Author's Note

What do you think??

Reviews

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

"Im out in the world and looking for more." My favourite line.....being invisible is really tough but we need to find the strength to find another journey to where we stick out like a rose in the sun light! So bright & colourful!

I truly enjoyed this piece! Your writing form is beautiful! Keep it up & look forward to reading more! :)

[paradise]

Stop making me want to cry!!! You always fasinate me everytime I read one of your poems Your a great writer great poem

[Shadow in the Dark]

I like it. You did the right thing in the end of the poem by moving on and forgeting the person who was ignoring you.

[roy mccarthy]

i like it,
nice flow to it,
and you're expressing your true feelings!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

nice poem

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

Thank You (:

[katyj]

I like every word of this one, I have felt this way a time or two.

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

Sorry for the error of line 13 (me me)