Lies

True Story

Lies....

You said that your all tough and stuff,

I didn't see that when time's got rough.

You said you loved me and we'd be forever,

but now were not together.

I cared so much, my heart beated faster when our fingers touched,

I thought you felt that too... or was that a lie like the other "few"?

Lies Lies they were lies.

Your nothing but a selfish liar.

I thought you said I was beautiful..?

Or is that just what you say to every girl?

You acted so different from the rest,

but when it came to my choices you weren't the best.

I was so in love and nieve,

I fell for the lie of..

You loving me.

Lies....

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[paradise]

Jess I know everything your feeling I love it and ewnjoyed it don't stop writing your great, you put so much anger and pain into it. I love it And love you and don't give up on Love One day you'll find a guys who's perfect and loves u in every way :D

[Black-Draped]

its so sad but i liked the emotions in it

[Shadow in the Dark]

Unfourtanently that is the reality of today's relationship. Everyone is so eager to get on to the new one, concour another person, gain another prize/trophey. It sucks that people have to go through that but really there is nothing you can do about it. It wasn't your fault or lack in judgment it was just the guy. Great writing keep it up.

[katyj]

so sad, Know the feelings really well.

[HeIsWe]

This is sad :'(

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

Kudos on your creation Dark Dancer.....you can feel the pain in your words & you brought along the reader as well! You did a fantastic job, keep writing!

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

it is.. but its true...

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i love this poem...but it is really sad... tear tear

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

ikr??

[Tree Bark]

oh so sad :(