Im done

Im done with you,

Were closed and through.

With all this pain,

What did you gain?

I was a flirt,

You turned to a jerk.

Im done with this,

You won't be missed...

~Dark Dancer

Reviews

[Shadow in the Dark]

Oooooohhhhh....... i think i know who this is about anyway i could clearly tell how you were feeling so you did a good job of that. KEEP WRITING!!!!! Also just to let you know if you're going to write a poem it doesn't have to be a rhyming one i had some poems that are not rhyming and they are still good and counted as poems.

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

Ik.. I just like to rhyme!!

[Tsering]

So lovely to read your poem, wish i'd written it. So much can be said with language in a very few words.

[paradise]

Damn Jess You shock me yet again I love it it has alot of emotion and anger Great write stong and powerful. I love it babe

[Dreamer_<3]

i think i get who this is about !! good job keep writing !!!

[Tree Bark]

hey it rhymes :D

[Dark Dancer (Grass Seed..]

Thanx :)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i get what you are trying to say and it came out good... i hope you continue writing...i think i get who its about