today, evan told me he wanted spaghetti

here ya go evan

I can taste it in my mind, 

This spaghetti I want

With thin noodles

And a rich sauce

Perhaps with some cheese

just thrown on the top

Reviews

[Lucy]

Great work!!

[ब्र&#..]

this was great, absolutely wonderful!
alltid
-Meja

[Allie :)]

P.S. You have a bad habit of sometimes trying to start every line with a capital...it stuck out to me, because I used to do it ALL the time!
Just remind yourself that capitals are supposedly to be used only after periods ;) Thanks boo :D

[Allie :)]

This is hilarious :)
It expresses who you are, but in an insanely artistic way.
You've offically achieved a level of cuteness that nobody has been able to reach before :)
I couldn't help but wonder if you could have added on a couple of stanzas, though they wouldn't have necessarily have to be about pasta :)

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

hahahahaha XD Fantabulous poem XD Amazing XD It seems to ryhme in certain parts, while not in others, but is still a good poem, none the less. The rythm was nice, and it flowed really well. Great pome XD

[Indigo Ribbon]

mmmmm .... Spaghetti... oops sorry there, got slightly sidetracked ^.^ , Anyways cute poem :-)

[Evan Kleve]

I love you.