Yearning for Night

In the night-time sky

All is peaceful and quiet

Why cant I live there?

Reviews

[acloudrift]

You want to go to heaven? That would be a glorious end! (look up the word glory)
(Your contraction needs an apostrophe. Cant is a word itself, and the meanings do not fit your scene.)
Other than that, I like it. You might enjoy my similar ones in the post "3 times 17 tries".

[Gio S.P.]

This has to be one of the most relatable and touching poems that I have ever come across. I am in love with this. Great job, Darius!

[Darius]

guys. why does this have so many views. I only leave for one year and bam, for some reason this explodes XD

[Allie :)]

This paints a picture of utter peace in my mind the minute that I finish reading it.
Just saying, I'm going to sound like everyone else when I say this, but I do believe that this haiku is absolutely perfect!
(and I have never said that in a review before :D)
100/100

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

Nice haiku :) I love the night time too, and this haiku showed one of the most amazing aspects of the night sky. Great job!!! Absolutely fabulous!!

Oh...the actual review...The flow was nice, adn it seemed bounce. Great job!

[Indigo Ribbon]

Beautiful Haiku :-) Alas one can't live in the night sky, despite how hard we all might try. Very nice ^.^

[Evan Kleve]

So you. So. You.

Lovely poem in all reality though. Bravo sir. Bravo.

[Bailey C. Writing]

The night-time sky is peaceful isn't? A beautiful, sweet haiku :3