The Joy of Icecream

The Joy of Icecream

A Poem by Darius

Melt-in-your-mouth joy
Cool to the touch and yummy
Making death closer

© 2011 Darius


Author's Note

Darius
a dark but happy paradox o_O and im going to be writing alot of haikus lately, just to take a break.

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I agree with Howl,
I love the I scream horror of this beautifully dark write.
Great Job!(but what did I expect?)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love how the haiku started out on a happy note and ended on a dark note :) It went form yummy ice cream, to ice cream brings you closer to death. I loved it, it flowed really well, and it was just a cool way to think of ice cream :) Fantabulous job!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 23, 2011
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Hey there! I'm Darius Taro, a 14 year old MALE Asian person! I like horror movies, swimming, video games, RAMEN, and writers cafe! I've been stressed lately, so I took a one year break. BUT GUESS WHA.. more..

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