O Father

This was written for my father in 2001.

When I was young

I idolized him

When I was a teen

I hated him

And now that I am a man

I want to be like him

Years ago you waited anxiously

For my first yawn

When I came into your arms

You held me graciously

I feel privileged to be your first-born

You honor me by giving me your name

I promise to carry on your legacy like an immortal flame

You named me after royalty

And showed me your loyalty

You always make me feel what I am capable of

When I need some one real bad

I have to just call up Dad

O Father

For you I will go farther

I understand now the love you have for me each day

I am grateful to you in every way

Love your only son

Darius

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

What a lovely poem for a father. I hope he liked it. Beautifully written. I liked it.

[annalysiar]

I like the flow of this poem, the feeling... Is beautiful.. And catching. Great write.

[Darius Chinoy]

Thank you so much Anna. I did not expect any one to read my poems here. I just use this account as a virtual storage and a platform to reflect what I write.

[annalysiar]

So do I. I couldn't help it I'm sorry. I really do like how you write, its gripping.