I Hope You

I hope you...

Read my words and know that I am talking to you
Knowing that this is strange but...
Know that as your eyes walk across my words that...
You are receiving the truth

I wanna do things with you
I mean everything with you

Long walks in the park holding hands
Talking to each other without words
Saying you're my girl and...
I am your man

I hope you...
Think of me when you are alone
Share my wish of us making a home
Before we said Hi, I...
I say I had a heart of stone but...
I hope that with this, that in you...
It is shown,
My heart is no longer cold

I hope you....
Read real close
So we can get real close and...
To you I can give.

With you in my world I now want to live
I want to lay with you
I mean...
Lay down and be on the phone with you for hours
And hours
And hours
And hours
And hours
And hours
And...

I wanna be with you
My feelings for you I want to show
Just so you can feel loved
This I hope you know!

Reviews

[Mr. Deft Diction]

I dig the light-heartedness of this piece. It's lovey; but not sexual...and at the same time, not sappy. The being on the phone for hours, and hours, and hours, and....

made me laugh, because who of us hasn't been there at some point? That was the OG way to show some love...way before girls started texting like crazy, LOL!!!!

Nice rhythm, and I enjoyed the imagery. Cool, cool piece.