I Don't Know How To Say This But�

I got a message from my father
He said He wants to better my world
Said if I let Him know who she is
He will give me my favorite girl

After He said this
I don't know how to say this, but�

I wrote Him a letter to answer back
I prayed to give it to Him
Then said she is just like that

My letter was a list that said
I don't know how to say this, but�

She stands five something
She is thin in her waist
She has long soft hair of silk
She is cute in her face

She shares love with me
Because I love the Father God
I love Jesus
And so does she

Her smile will light up a room
Even if it's not dark
I know this is truth because
That room will be my heart

She will be like inner electricity
Able to renew feelings that are old
Sending a charge through me
Stimulating my mind, body, and soul

She will be like me
Silly�
Loving to laugh
Warm�
Able to care
Just like me

She will have eternal knowledge
Smarter than the world will ever see
Her personality will be an orange moon
Reflecting the light of her beauty

Her language will be one I have never heard but...
We will speak alike
So I will understand her every word

That was what my letter said
I don't know how to say this, but�

He replied to let me know my letter was read
My letter came back
At the bottom was a message that said

"Is this what you like? This lady above?"
I replied to the Lord
"No! It is her that I love"

That's what was said
I don't know how to say this but�

This conversation really happened
My story is true

I don't know how to say this, but�

A week after I answered my father
I then met you

I don't know how to say this but�
But�

Reviews

[TP LaRose]

This is a wonderful poem. It reminds me of the book "Conversations with God"
It flowed well and described your love beautifully.

She will be like inner electricity
Able to renew feelings that are old
Sending a charge through me
Stimulating my mind, body, and soul.

I loved these lines. It showed a passion that resonates within many. Your words in all your poems are so very romantic and calming somehow.
Beautifully done!
TP...Poetess

[distefano 401]

that was so sweet. i loved the part..

"Her smile will light up a room
Even if it's not dark
I know this is truth because
That room will be my heart"

that was really creative. this seemed like something personal the way you added so much detail and wrote...as if you were speaking i guess. it was easy to imagine. good job.