Sweet Whisper

Excuse me miss
Can we talk for a second?
Any man in your life right now
He can get to stepping
I saw you from afar
And to tell the truth I can�t deny
It�s a lot of things about you
You got a few qualities that I really, really like

See....

You're more than just a big butt and a cute face
That�s how I know that between you and me
More than just sex could take place
We could talk on the phone
I'll tell you bout my times
Or meet up in person
I can gaze into your eyes
You can tell me bout your day
I can listen real good
Or you can just lay back
I can rub you like a real man should
I know it sounds soft
But I�m hard when needed
I know what they don�t understand
That�s how a woman should be treated

So....

I'll open your door
So you can walk on by
I'll call you in the middle of the day
Just to say hi
Cause I know that�s what you�re missing
That�s what you want in your life
So when the day is gone
I can love you all through the night

Reviews

[Bennett Logan]

I really enjoyed reading this... It has a spoken word feel to it. You do it well and you write honestly. No frilly language or forced rhymes here... I like that. My only suggestion would be to use punctuation at certain line breaks to emphasize pauses. Anyway, I completely enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.

[Glee]

Interesting. Sexually charged poem. But how could you know what a woman wants? Half the time women don't even know what they want.