Without You

From my book "Do'moning"...You can get it at www.poetrytap.com

I thought my summer was warm
The sun it shined as it glimmered across the sky
Then I,
Soon to realize that,
This was the calm before my demise cause,
I on this day am me without you.

The birds always chirp as they fly
But on this day they fall as I cry
Opportunity is there but not taken I know not why
I can�t see you and I am not blind
I am nothing without you I can not lie.

I don�t care about anything else see
My only concern is you wanting to love me
You wanting to hug me
Am I so wrong cause in your life, I
Dream of no one but God above me?

I put you at the highest human point
I�ll make a song about you
Use a little slang, It�ll be my �flyest joint�
You know the song of all songs to ever be made
But without you my lyrics will only go in vain.
Please take away this pain, I
Can�t eat, can�t sleep, don�t want to be me�
With out you.

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is really so dark and sad but so beautifully written!
Very intense piece of writing...


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