LAX Haiku

Haiku I wrote about LAX airport

LAX

Upwards they all go.
How will I ever get down?
Lost escalator.


Hurried kisses here
Too late the plane is leaving
No time for kisses.


She promised peanuts.
There seems everything but that.
Where did my nuts go?

We drive this circle.
It is the same every time.
You always come back.


The wand waves at me
They make me take off my shoes.
I look suspicious.

Author's Note

Just for fun, comments and crits welcome.

Reviews

[Cat]

I really really like this, super unique and fun, but with depth.

[Brenda Sue]

Beautifully penned. Great job.