Need You

Tears crashing like waves of sadness 
drifting down my face 
everytime you walk away i have this fear 
this fear you'll never come back 
but even after all the fights 
you always come back 
after everything we've been through 
you calm my fears 
i'd ask you to make a promise 
but i can't make you 
so i'll make it myself 
i promise never again 
never again will i leave you 
walk away from what we have 
never again will i turn away 
never will i turn my back 
no poem has to rhyme 
to get a point across 
so here is my point believe it is true 
forever until the day i die, i need you. 

Reviews

[KeeD]

Even though the door is shut, two hearts on either side always wondering when their worlds will collide. Forever until the day they die.. They'll beat for each other.. tears of love they shall cry.
I love your work its so brutally honest and heart wrenching.. Has such a human touch to it.. filled with pain, regret, emotion and happy ever afters.

[Orlando Murcia]

no poem has to rhyme
to get a point across
so here is my point believe it is true
forever until the day i die, i need you...


It was said in just those lines...

Wonderful work :-)

[Darian Justine]

Thank you, I appreciate it! :)