"No Commitment Foreseen"

"No Commitment Foreseen"

A Poem by Summer Blue

So afraid in the beginning…

Didn’t want to let myself go…

I was so afraid of being hurt…

I fought you off with all my might…

Until I realized, it was with you whom I wanted to spend my nights…

 

Things happened so fast…

A little confusing it was…

I still was afraid of giving myself up…

Also knowing this was more than I intended…

Being more afraid of letting go when I found some things I wasn’t expecting…

 

You then told me you loved me more than you have ever loved…

Claimed that you never felt this kind before…

I could see the fear in your face…afraid I was to walk toward the door…

 

Of course I did stay…it was obvious now…

I loved you so much I wanted it all to work out…

I had a vision of you proposing to me…

Your wife some day I wanted to be…

 

I really thought my fairy tale was coming true…

I could have sworn I seen myself in you…

I thought you seen yourself in me too…

Until I realized it was all my imagination…

Seeing clearly now the truth…

 

The down on one knee…proposing to me…

The wedding dress…the tux…and the flowers I seen…

Were my dreams playing tricks on me…

There is no way with the way that you’ve changed…

That with me it is commitment you seek…

Because you are doing your best to get rid of me…

© 2010 Summer Blue


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Reading this and your profile really hits me knocks me down real hard. I am kinda asking myself how someone can't believe in true love and happiness

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Summer Blue
Summer Blue

Altoona, PA



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