"Fight" or "Flight"

"Fight" or "Flight"

A Poem by Summer Blue

 

I cried last night…

Don’t feel sadness for me…

Be not ashamed of yourself…

Proud you shall be…

For it was you whom made me see…

Fight or flight it must be…

I fought the signs I have seen…

You made things very clear you see…

Flight is what shall become of me…

For the fight I fought was lost…

And this flight I must take alone…

Thou shall stay true to ones self I see…

For you have not been true to me…

I demand much more than just an eternity…

For I wanted what you portrayed yourself to be…

Fake was not the ending I foreseen…

Nor hurt…Nor betrayal…Nor a cheat…

Hurt and wasted is what I may be…

But a piece that ends with you…

Is now the beginning of a new journey for me…

 

 

 

 

© 2010 Summer Blue


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Fighting rarely take us to a good place. After a time even a sweet love will turn sour. I like the ending. When heaven turn to hell. Time to run. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


The last two lines kill me.

Did you mean the affair ended with a
little "piece", or did you mean that
ending the affair brings you peace ?

Either way it seems appropriate and
that seems to be how it happens.

Very well written. This writer has a
gift for showing deep emotion while at
the same time remaining somewhat mysterious.

Excellent writing.

------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 21, 2010
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Summer Blue
Summer Blue

Altoona, PA



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