Men and Boys

Different, amiright

I giggled, he laughed
I spoke, he replied
I texted, he ignored
I kissed, he slobbered
I planned, he observed
I smiled, he shrugged
I cried, he sighed
I loved, he lusted
I begged, he left
I hate Boys.

I giggled, he grinned
I spoke, he listened
I texted, he called
I kissed, he caressed
I planned, he organized
I smiled, he beamed
I cried, he consoled
I loved, he adored
I begged, he pleaded
I love Men.

Reviews

[Eleah Ruffin]

This is a really great piece! I like the stark differences between Men and Boys. Nicely done

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Im glad you have come to understand such difference, perhaps this man will stay in your life

[Sinbulvinter]

Great play on words here and sentence styling. I think you hit the nail right on the head with the comparing you made between boys and men. *stands and applauds loudly*

[Richard simpson]

I like this. Very good choice of words and sentence styling. Wonderful and a delight to read.

[Tony Jordan]

Men are wonderful creatures - I even know one of them - me!
:DD

I like this Daphnee
:)

[Jessica Lima]

This is a great piece for you Daphnee. I found myself smiling as I read this. So much truth! Nice Work!

[Cœur]

This is such an accurate statement, and a nice piece.

[Gee]

You have a keen eye m'dear, well done

[arcandon]

this is really cute and very funny
very good job

[Surya]

That makes a man, true indeed...I liked it..