Men and Boys

Different, amiright

I giggled, he laughed
I spoke, he replied
I texted, he ignored
I kissed, he slobbered
I planned, he observed
I smiled, he shrugged
I cried, he sighed
I loved, he lusted
I begged, he left
I hate Boys.

I giggled, he grinned
I spoke, he listened
I texted, he called
I kissed, he caressed
I planned, he organized
I smiled, he beamed
I cried, he consoled
I loved, he adored
I begged, he pleaded
I love Men.

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Ah! Love this so much, can you tell me where to find the men? 😉 thanks for sharing this one!

[Daphnee]

Honey, Im still looking for a man myself😅 thank you for the kind words!! It means a lot

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Haha! Hope we start having better luck soon 😄

[Abby]

hahaha - nailed it!

ironically, most boys mistake their weak behavior for manhood ...

[Sammie Sanchez]

i love this poem. i can relate to this so much. "I kissed, he slobbered" i had this happen to me. Bad/hilarious memories

[Hebe]

Spectacular! you pegged it perfectly! :)

[Ruben Rodriguez]

I love how this is structured. Women and Girls would be the same... very nice.

[Cobblestone Traveler]

This received an audible exclamation from me. Specifically "WOO!". Creative and clever. Thanks for sharing.

[The Exiled Wolf]

Love the structure. I admit that boys are sometimes don't care how the others feel. Only would care when they become mature and know who and what to care for!

[Samiksha]

Beautiful work , absolutely impressed.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Hehe nice one. When can a boy become a man. Such a quest. Keep writing. :)

[apennylate]

Almost thought you had just repeated the same poem twice... This is what I get for allowing my eyes to follow boy-ish ways... Hah, nice idea, and excellently done... Cleverly penned...