Men and Boys

Men and Boys

A Poem by Daphnee
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Different, amiright

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I giggled, he laughed
I spoke, he replied
I texted, he ignored
I kissed, he slobbered
I planned, he observed
I smiled, he shrugged
I cried, he sighed
I loved, he lusted
I begged, he left
I hate Boys.

I giggled, he grinned
I spoke, he listened
I texted, he called
I kissed, he caressed
I planned, he organized
I smiled, he beamed
I cried, he consoled
I loved, he adored
I begged, he pleaded
I love Men.

© 2017 Daphnee


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Ah! Love this so much, can you tell me where to find the men? 😉 thanks for sharing this one!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daphnee

7 Years Ago

Honey, Im still looking for a man myself😅 thank you for the kind words!! It means a lot
EcstaticEuphoria

7 Years Ago

Haha! Hope we start having better luck soon 😄
hahaha - nailed it!

ironically, most boys mistake their weak behavior for manhood ...

Posted 7 Years Ago


i love this poem. i can relate to this so much. "I kissed, he slobbered" i had this happen to me. Bad/hilarious memories

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Spectacular! you pegged it perfectly! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how this is structured. Women and Girls would be the same... very nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This received an audible exclamation from me. Specifically "WOO!". Creative and clever. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the structure. I admit that boys are sometimes don't care how the others feel. Only would care when they become mature and know who and what to care for!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful work , absolutely impressed.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hehe nice one. When can a boy become a man. Such a quest. Keep writing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Almost thought you had just repeated the same poem twice... This is what I get for allowing my eyes to follow boy-ish ways... Hah, nice idea, and excellently done... Cleverly penned...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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