I giggled, he laughed
I spoke, he replied
I texted, he ignored
I kissed, he slobbered
I planned, he observed
I smiled, he shrugged
I cried, he sighed
I loved, he lusted
I begged, he left
I hate Boys.
I giggled, he grinned
I spoke, he listened
I texted, he called
I kissed, he caressed
I planned, he organized
I smiled, he beamed
I cried, he consoled
I loved, he adored
I begged, he pleaded
I love Men.
Love the structure. I admit that boys are sometimes don't care how the others feel. Only would care when they become mature and know who and what to care for!
Almost thought you had just repeated the same poem twice... This is what I get for allowing my eyes to follow boy-ish ways... Hah, nice idea, and excellently done... Cleverly penned...
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