Beautiful

Beautiful are you, generation of light
Though young, you struggle and you fight
People pass by everyday and see plain you
They don't see the hero inside, but I do
Even if we are thousands of miles apart
You are important and found a place in my heart
You may not know, but you give me hope
You teach me to deal and how to cope
Here for you for as long as can be
I will support you and I know you'll support me

Author's Note

A rhyming poem for a very good friend who has helped me so much ❤

Reviews

[mercy party]

This was real, it's always important to
acknowledge the validity of a friend. You did a nice job with this poem and i'm sure the person would be proud to see your writing skills! Great job!

[Cobblestone Traveler]

Very endearing and heartwarming. I enjoyed reading this!

[Poetic License]

I absolutely adore this. Such a beautiful message. This touched me deeply.

"People pass by everyday and see plain you
They don't see the hero inside, but I do"

I love this most - to take the time to see beneath and then to reach out is a beautiful thing.

[Jessica Lima]

AWWWW. It must be nice to have such a friendship. I like how it flows and the message of the poem too! Can't wait to read more from you.

[Richard simpson]

Very good poem. It's a beautifully well put out there poem that expresses the inner and outer reaches of what is truly beautiful.

[Najam Us Saher]

Very sweet. You are lucky to have such a friend with you. The flow and the rhythm is very nice. You have successfully managed to express that you see the good in your friend.

[Taz]

I love how you have such a personal and kind rythem to it, I know that friend of yours will know how amazing it is when she sees it. ;) It is so beautiful enough to make a sixteen year old girl cry. I love it with all of my heart.