Beautiful

Beautiful are you, generation of light
Though young, you struggle and you fight
People pass by everyday and see plain you
They don't see the hero inside, but I do
Even if we are thousands of miles apart
You are important and found a place in my heart
You may not know, but you give me hope
You teach me to deal and how to cope
Here for you for as long as can be
I will support you and I know you'll support me

Author's Note

A rhyming poem for a very good friend who has helped me so much ❤

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

I can feel the friendship and love here. What a great job!

[Sammie Sanchez]

well done, nicely written, keep it up

[CAPOLAVORO]

Good piece. Your friend would surely be happy after reading this one. On the other hand, imagery could still be enhanced. Keep writing. :)

-C

[Samiksha]

This is an altogether different level, my friend. Loved the line of thought here! Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the kind and gentle words.
"Beautiful are you, generation of light
Though young, you struggle and you fight
People pass by everyday and see plain you
They don't see the hero inside, but I do "
The above lines. Perfect and wonderful. Thank you Daphnee for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

This is very beautiful and cute, your friend must be a very lucky person... wish every one could feel the same way

[Hebe]

I love the first line: Beautiful are you, generation of light ... lovely heartwarming poem, you are lucky, it's hard to find true friends in this life :)

[Sofia]

A really sweet and wonderful poem. I loved it :) May your frienship always blossom :)

[Surya]

For a friend, it's sweet..I enjoyed...:)

[KWP]

lovely and heartfelt - i believe this is the best for of expression for letting someone know how much you mean to them if you cant be there in person X