I said, you said

I said, you said

A Poem by Daphnee
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Love that is one sided is not love at all, its obsession

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I said you were handsome
I said you were perfect
You said I was cute
You said I was good enough
I said you were a miracle
I said you meant a lot
You said you liked my body
You said you liked how I felt
I said please dont go
I said give us another try
You said you didnt want to
You never said anything after that

© 2017 Daphnee


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This was relatively straightforward, but it made its point clear, and one that many know well: a one sided dialogue, if there can even be such a thing. Nice work.

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Daphnee
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Hi! I am 20 and absolutely obsessed with reading and writing. Some of my favorite authors are Jane Austen, Ernest Hemingway, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Edgar Allan Poe, and Stephen King. I am open to critic.. more..

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A Poem by Daphnee