One down...

One down...

A Poem by Daphnee
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Revenge is bittersweet

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Sight getting blurry
Eyes start watering
She must stick to the plan
Mind dark as Night
Thoughts turn terrifying
She will have her revenge
Heart slowly breaking... shattering
Shrieking voice cries inside
She isn't in her right mind
Hands touching
Clothes coming off
She never thought he'd deceive
Painful Memories
Believing all his lies
She cant turn back now
Bullets are now loaded
In position, already aimed
She wears an evil smile
Heart is pounding
Fingers start to shake
BANG!.......
One down, one to go

© 2016 Daphnee


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Well done. Great poem. You tell a full story in an short poem. Very dark but beautiful.

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Added on April 15, 2016
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Tags: revenge, love, heartbreak, cheating, sadness, crazy, girl, crying

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Daphnee
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A Poem by Daphnee