In a Name

Dont associate people with their name

Don't get attached to names
Cause you will know one
Impact your life & change your world
Fights come, separation is vital
Name will stick in your mind
Haunt your every move
Find another same name
Unspoken tension towards them
Create problems that aren't there
Don't get attached to names
Know them by their face, their spirit, their soul
But never
Their Names

Reviews

[Randhir kaur]

Yeah so right..beautifully expressed... well done..

[Country boy183798]

"Find another same name
Unspoken tension towards them
Create problems that aren't there
Don't get attached to names"
I love that bit! Very good, and great progress!
Keep on writing.

[Ben Barton]

This is cool! I don't know how I'm ever going to name my kids - so many names are already off the table because of previous experiences with people!

I really like the pace you've given this piece with you word economy; it reads fast right up until the end, where we get a chance to breathe and grasp what you've said properly. Keep writing, Daphnee! :)