This Friend

This Friend

A Poem by Daphnee
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This friend & I are one in the same

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I have this friend, her name is unknown
Her life consists of sorrow, pain, & tears
Been with no boy, virgin to everything
Unwanted by boys & men, although she craves love & attention
Who would want a girl who speaks her mind & looks weird
Funny how the World revolves around outer appearances
If they'd only see who she was on the inside
They'd be flocking
For she holds so much care & love in her single heart
then ten average girls do in their whole body
She keeps the pain hidden & knows what it feels like to be unloved
This friend, unlike any other, is my closest friend
She has no friends except herself
We are a lot alike actually
In fact
I am her

© 2016 Daphnee


Author's Note

Daphnee
Alright, criticize away pulease. I need it.

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Don't let anyone get you down, if the world don't think of you this is it's own loss... Ha! How strange this world has become, the outside appearance means everything to this world even if you have a soul that has an ocean of love... I can feel your words because I'm in the same position right now... The poem represents the true souls of this world that is full of love.... I loved it's meaning and thoughts....

Regards
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 9, 2016
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Tags: friend, sad, life, pained, sadness, pain, battle

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Daphnee
Daphnee

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Hi! I am 20 and absolutely obsessed with reading and writing. Some of my favorite authors are Jane Austen, Ernest Hemingway, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Edgar Allan Poe, and Stephen King. I am open to critic.. more..

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A Poem by Daphnee