The Decieving Heart

An Unfinished Story #mylife

Johnathan looked around for his gun and finally spotted it on the ground about ten feet away. He dashed to get but Silver was too quick. She snatched the gun, stepped a few paces back and aimed the gun at Johnathan. Panting, Johnathan managed to choke out a few words, "Please, Silver. I beg you. This is my family I'm trying to save." His sad pleading eyes sunk deep into Silvers heart as she lowered the gun. Johnathan sighed a breath of relief and motioned his eyes to the exit door for Silver to follow. They both started towards the exit. Johnathan stopped and spoke up, "I have an idea. I need you to help me carry it through but you first need to promise me if I die, you will go on and get my family to safety." Silver felt a lump in her chest and hesitated but replied, "Okay." Johnathan nodded, grabbed her hand, and opened the door.

Author's Note

Alright, is this a story even worth starting/finishing? Does it sound like a good story??

Reviews

[Pete]

Yes. You should finish it. Cool beginning.

[Tinman07]

I'm interested to see how this would continue. Is it apocalyptic? Is it a Bonnie and Clyde scenario? Are they trying to escape their past?
It could go so many ways...

[Patrick Kimera]

Definitely! You should finish it! Am thinking it's some sort of zombie apocalypse... But really, you should finish it.