Okay as for the meaning of the poem, it has deeper meaning than it looks... Writing is the best way to let out pain or any kind of thoughts that troubles you... This doesn't sound to me weird, many of the reader can relate to this, it is thought provoking.....
As for the structure of the poem, it flows well, you have maintained simplicity in it which makes it more understandable, it speaks to the reader... Clever work...
Regards
Dhiman
Something to remember in general, "weird" is okay! "Okay" is dull! The first step towards becoming a writer is to say goodbye to sanity and welcome madness in with open arms! All great poets were nuts!
Being serious now, it's a good poem, well done. I like it how you've kept it short, but deep. This one of those poems that everyone could enjoy reading regardless of their taste in poetry.
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