Women

Women

A Poem by Daphnee
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Take notes, men

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The Orchid lays there
so gentle in the water
delicate, fragile
how a woman wants to feel
beautiful and safe
sensitive and innocent
flawless and perfect
women feel special and wanted

© 2016 Daphnee


Author's Note

Daphnee
Honestly, I don't know if this a "true haiku" but again, I'm only human

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You have left a message in your poem again... In my view, women are the truest gifts of this world, they are the sweetest and they are the most lovable.... A true woman wants to be cherished, loved, cared and protected and this is what a true man should do... Because women are special and men should make them feel special... This was a sweet one I would say... So well done...

About, Haiku... Hmmm I'm not a poet or teacher but I feel like I should share with you my knowledge..
Haiku is one of the shortest form of Japanese poetry. It's a poem of 3 lines, with 17 syllables in total. The first line contains 5 syllables, the second one 7 syllables and the third one 5 syllables, and the title of the poem should be the first line of the poem.... We are all on the same journey, keep on trying my dear frnd... Any kind of help just leave a mail I will be right back to you.....

Regards
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2016
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Hi! I am 20 and absolutely obsessed with reading and writing. Some of my favorite authors are Jane Austen, Ernest Hemingway, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Edgar Allan Poe, and Stephen King. I am open to critic.. more..

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A Poem by Daphnee