l o v e late nights

l o v e late nights

A Poem by Daphine Gray

i gotta tell you something

i’ve been in love

one , too many times

it ain’t make me heartless

it made me wanna cry

i gave my all to you

n you let my soul dim

where was the light

in me when you was shining

i never thought i would be so heartless

it made me wanna love harder

then feel thoughtless

you would never understand my mind

do you even remember the tears

you bought to my eyes

this ain’t my last cry

this is only help

i would’ve never put you through this

i thought ii under a spell

it was hurting me all these year

i didn’t even live in fear

now i feel like my every move

is being watched

i don’t even wanna open my eyes

© 2018 Daphine Gray


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"i gotta tell you something
i’ve been in love
one , too many times
it ain’t make me heartless
it made me wanna cry "

hit me really hard. Heartbreak is agonizing, but what's even more astounding is how we manage to come back from it. I can feel the raw emotion coming from this piece. Great job :) I hope that one day you'll find someone that makes you better than before you met them, and not worse.


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