you don’t care .

I cried for you
I cried about you
I cried with you
So why treat me like i was never there for you
Every time you called i picked up
I had a choice not to but i did
For you, to comfort you
You couldn't even do that for me
Where were you?
Where were you when i had nobody to turn to.
Where were you when I didn't have nowhere to go
Where were you when i needed you.

Reviews

[Fanicia E.]

I am way too familiar with this feeling lol. I found this piece to be a simply elegant, yet straightforward articulation of feelings that many have faced at some point in their lives. Love can be one of the most vulnerable things to experience, but can be sullied when that vulnerability is taken advantage of.

[Daphine Gray]

thanks for your opinion, i really appreciate it

[Fanicia E.]

You're welcome!

[BlackPrince]

I know what it is like to be taken for granted. Your poem certainly resonates with millions of people out here.

By the way, though this is of subject, I think your skin looks beautiful.

WELL DONE

[Daphine Gray]

thank you and thanks i appreciate it

[Verse]

This is an honest cry, the anguish is almost palpable. :):). If the miscreant is reading this, s/he ought to be ashamed!

V

[Daphine Gray]

it was honestly but im growin into better things

[Zoey]

I wouldn't call this a poem but good job.

[Daphine Gray]

thanks hunny 💖

[Daphine Gray]

what would you call it ?

[Zoey]

A masterpiece

[Daphine Gray]

thank you so much 💜

[Zoey]

Ur Welcome