Wind

Wind is all around us... It follows us everywhere....

I hear whistling in Spring

and Fall.

And I can hear your

music, too.

You carry passengers around,

you are their plane.

You travel fast and slow,

and sometimes even both.

You're like a ghost, 

because you can go through

trees, and grass, and also us.

You are the "Wind".

that surrounds us.

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy reading this.
In this poem I am inspiring you to fly like a dandelion in the Wind..
Use your Imagination.......

Reviews

[MelissaAndres]

Very good. Maybe the word "because" would be better in the poem instead of "cuz" but otherwise I think you did very well with this!

[Miss Sharon]

Beautiful imagery in this write Daughter. HE is the wind that surrounds us and is also the One who meets every need if we but ask....and sometimes even if we don't ask! ~Sharon

[Marie]

That's a beautiful description of wind. I can imagine it carrying us all around...

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for sharing as the wind blows you away.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the flying feeling of this..."dandelion will make you wise, tell us if you laugh or cry, blow away dandelion" (rolling stones)

my only problem is the "cuz"---i would stick to formal standard
English...either "because" or " 'cause"

but i like the free feeling of the ghost coming and going.