Dreams

Dream tonighttt

Dreams:

I can’t wait ‘till it strikes midnight,

that’s when my movie starts.

I don’t have to pay,

in order to watch it.

I don’t  have to lose my time,

in order to find it.

I just lay and watch my little play.

Then, I try to memorize my little play.

So it would stay in my head,

for days,

weeks,

months,

and maybe even years.

It always occurs in a surprise,

sometimes in horror,

then a love story,

and then a comedy.

But, I wait for my movie patiently,

and remember the movies before it.

I will wait ‘till it strikes 12,

then I will just close my eyes,

and wait ‘till it begins.

Reviews

[Bear]

Nice concept, I am a believer in the power of dreams, in fact part of my studies included sleep and dream interpretation. So your poems topic is right up my alley and put a smile on my face, thanks for that my friend :~)

[justdandy]

Thank you for the kind words

[Jocie de Jaune]

Wow, I agree with Alex, this is really relatable! I love your line 'I don’t have to lose my time, in order to find it.'! It makes me think that dreams are in another dimension. Almost as if I'm in another world when I have them. I also love your line 'I just lay and watch the little play. Then, I try to memorize the little play.', the repetition is great and I love the idea of a 'little play' it makes me think like I have my own little magical world in my head. But maybe change the two the's into my as you've used my above. so instead 'I just lay and watch my little play. Then, I try to memorize my little play.', but hey it's your writing style! Just a suggestion! But great work here! My favourite out of all your work!!! love it!x


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[justdandy]

Well thank you for the suggestion... I will absolutely change it...

[Alex Cook]

I like your work. This hits home with me. I look forward to dreams every night. Things I could never imagine awake.

[justdandy]

Thank you so much.... I really enjoy writing poems but when I receive a review... it's even more enjoyable