Burn down the city

Burn down the city

A Poem by Dante

Lets burn down the city

In shock and awe my... how pretty

But back to the start

they hung around, they call me smart

Quick witted and as sharp as a dart

 

Lets burn down the city

In shock and awe my... how pretty

Lets look now at the beginning of the end

Hmm so much now where to begin

The scent of burning

The urges flying

 

Lets burn down the city

In shock and awe my... how pretty

Now lets watch it burn

I will laugh and watch as the tables turn

Finally watching the city a blaze

Hysterically laughing as the vision becomes a haze

"maybe this will lead to better days"

© 2010 Dante


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This piece is quite good, but I would separate it into stanzas if you're going to use repetition. Also, there are a few typos or mistakes..

*the
*Finally
*Hysterically

Overall, good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 13, 2010
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Dante
Dante

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