Friendship Lost In

A Piece..strongly felt about a great person in my life that has the biggest open heart I have ever met. He will always love you, even if you turn around & insult him, he will always have that LOVE..

"So those of you who can't be true...turn away cause I don't value you, but in the end...you will see that your vengeful hearts will be the end of you, your thoughts are twisted, evil when wicked....I feel bad for you with all of your judgment........cause your heart is filled with nothin...i hope one day you can stand up and say....that he was a friend true and true that left like the wind, but returned with the power in the midst of so many doubters...so turn around and leave them be.....cause you don't value thee...don't be surprised when he WINS THE Good Fight, but true to form....he will continue to do you no HARM...cause he has the gift of true LOVE towards others and though I do NOT share his gift...innocent in nature but stings like bee..don't be fooled by my beautiful smile, my flirtatious wit and dancing like style, cause in the End, I will always have....a wonderful friend for years to come regardless of what..... he has DONE."       -Chandra Healy 

Author's Note

Please don't be too cruel...My work is usually not in a slang like manner, but I was feeling a bit sassy today.....But, I love to learn as much as can, please review with an open heart and have respect for the art.....Constructive Criticism!

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

I liked and loved this piece but as you need criticism then i just wanna say only one thing, the thing is "TRY WRITING POETRY'S IN STANZA'S RATHER THAN IN SUMMARY'S", that's it. If you do follow my words, you'll touch the sky very soon... you've a talent of writing, i've seen though... you have to know more about this ...meant "How to write" . you know very well how to write but you don't know how to write...(i hope ya got what i wanna say)... !

Now come to the review...
i loved the theme, the concept and your idea to write. Beautiful thoughts.
Keep write some more stuffs, i'd love to read youse more.

[Chandra.HEntertainment]

Thank you so much. I appreciate any help I can receive, I agree with you that we need to hear the things that need work just as much as positive reinforcement. I was struggling with the format a bit. I am writer for a publication, but writing poetry is a completely different animal.....

Thank you for taking the time to review my work in detail and to do so with class and manners - means the world to me. Good Things!

[Chandra.HEntertainment]

Thanks Sanya

[NA]

excellent piece....keep it up :) x

[sanya]

love it it has so many feelings and emotions

[Chandra.HEntertainment]

Thank you so much for your comment and honest opinion of my work. It is so refreshing to know that there are individuals out there who actually care about your work as an artist. Good Things!

[sanya]

it was my pleasure to read and review it

[Chandra.HEntertainment]

Thank you very much Enchanted Raven...you brought a smile to my face. Been hectic with my move recently, and writing seems to calm me down..gets me focused. I love it. I really appreciate your time!

[sanya]

enchanted raven?????????

[zainul]

I appreciate your love and respect for the person.
Good efforts.
Keep writing more and read writes and reviews of others.
Your confidence will grow over time.

[Chandra.HEntertainment]

thank you Zainul, that makes me feel very good. I will for sure...I appreciate the kind words...Cheers

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear writer.
Would you tell me what's the meaning of 'Chandra', part of your name?
In Sanskrit and Bengali Chandra means moon.

[Chandra.HEntertainment]

Hello, yes my mother was very spiritual and basically a hippy. It is a name that I believe is predominately used for men from India. It is interpreted as the meaning of Moon. One thing I have always been proud of, was my name because it has a meaning behind it and it holds value to my life. I thought you were from India, I think. Am I correct? What does your name define?