You Evocatively Promised Me Heaven

You evocatively promised me Heaven
But left me at the gate
You provocatively left me unfinished
And filled me up with hate

Sweet were your smile and demeanor
Calm was your warming touch
Your action could not have been meaner
The tease was just too much

I stood in the darkness, crying
So close and then denied
Your laughter, an echo of triumph
You chose to not be mine

You evocatively promised me Heaven
But left in the dead of night
As I see your disappearing
I think you did it out of spite

Reviews

[Lianne]

I liked how you expressed your feelings in this poem, the more I read this the more I found myself naturally putting myself in your shoes. reading this was enjoyable. good one :)

[Danomaly1983]

Thank you very much for reviewing, Lianne :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

very moving this poem, full of emotion and really tells a story.
i love the way it flows and the rhyming scheme :)
i liked this write, job well done:)
well written :)

[Danomaly1983]

Thank you very much for reviewing, Cimmy :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome anytime :)