BERZERK

BERZERK

A Poem by Dannyisawriter

My leg started shaking 
My arms are flailing 
I think I'll call it dancing 
I'm doing my best Elvis impersonation 
Saying, "Thank you, thank you very much!" 
And other dumb things as such

I'm going BERZERK!!!
B...R...Z...R...K
I'm more than okay
I'm going BERZERK!!!

It's just me, myself, and I
Exactly how I like 
The atmosphere is just right 
I'm losing my mind tonight 
So I'm dancing like no one's watchin
So watch me dance
Oh wait...you can't!

B...R...Z...R...K
I'm more than okay
I'm going BERZERK!!!

I just drank some caffeine 
And I can't stop laughing 
Some say it's my alcohol 
Well watch me do cart wheels down the hall!

Someone once told me 
I can't forget to take time
To find some happiness that's mine
So here I am chillaxin
Having a good time laughing 
I'll be up till 3 in the morning 
And at 2 in the afternoon snoring

I'm going BERZERK!!!
B...R...Z...R...K
I'm more than okay

For a few hours I fogot all my problems 
For a few hours I beat the doldrums 
So watch me lose my mind till I pant
Oh wait...you can't!

B...R...Z...R...K
I'm more than okay
I'm going BERZERK!!!
I'm going BERZERK!!!

© 2014 Dannyisawriter


Author's Note

Dannyisawriter
This was just for fun. So don't bother over-analyzing it. I know it's not perfect LOL :)

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:p so differnt from what you right. But very nice and i like the photo you use looks like me :p. Keep up the good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


:p so differnt from what you right. But very nice and i like the photo you use looks like me :p. Keep up the good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


VERY different from what you're normal writing is haha. But I like it it's more fun and joyful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dannyisawriter

9 Years Ago

Thanks, I felt like unwinding for a change instead of always being serious lol :)
An interesting change for you, well done. I liked how you stripped down berzerk to its elements, brzrk.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is the kind of poem I could EASILY imagine being played at a high school dance! This was very fun to read, I enjoyed it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yep, this one screams...loudly. Keep dancing my friend, nothing wrong with that at all

Posted 9 Years Ago


This has a hammer to the head drive to it! Sometimes, it's good to just go all out!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Aahaha, seems like this would make a good song. Great work, my friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 12, 2014
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