Something Glorious/Something Beautiful

You're staring at the ceiling

Can't describe the hurt you're feeling 

Can't fall asleep tonight

Unsure what it is about you that wasn't right 

He broke your heart 

And you're not sure if you can restart 

Let me show you something glorious 

Let me show you Someone glorious 

His love is divine 

He'll never leave you behind 

So push through your fear 

Open your heart and God will appear 

No man can compare 

Any damage he did, God can repair 

So don't give up hope 

God will clear away the smoke 

Let me show you something beautiful 

Let me show you you're beautiful 

God made you the way you're meant to be 

And he loves you invariably

So just because one man can't see what he's missing 

Doesn't mean anything 

Just follow God 

Trust in his grand plot 

You'll never be alone 

As he'll show you a love like you've never known 

Let me show you something glorious 

Let me show you Someone glorious 

Let me show you something beautiful 

let me show you you're beautiful 

God loves you 

And you'll never be alone 

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

Nicely written. This is the perfect comfort poem for somebody who's just broken up with somebody! Keep up the good work!

[Dannyisawriter]

Thanks for taking the time to read my work :) Means a lot

[Riley Justine]

Really well written. The truth to this poem just makes it even better, I remember when you first read my writing and told me to look to God and I denied that I still had depression. The fact that someone could just read my writing and tell me God was on my side showed me where I really needed to look. So thank you Danny, for showing me someone glorious.

[Dannyisawriter]

You're welcome. Tbh I actually came with the idea for this poem after that conversation we had when I messaged you about my other poem.

[Skai Rain]

I have never really enjoyed religion, but I can not deny that this is a sweet and beautiful poem. Great writing.

[Dannyisawriter]

Yeah, I don't like "religion" much either. But I do strongly believe in having a relationship with God. They're two things that get mixed up seemingly all the time.

[Skai Rain]

That is a curious point of view. I like it.

[Dannyisawriter]

Jesus himself condemned religion sort of. I'm just paraphrasing, but he says you can follow all the do's and don'ts of religion but if you don't have a relationship with him it's all pointless. That's why it irks me so much when I see Christians judge people by appearances or just because they think they should act differently when it's where your heart is that matters. (Sorry. I kind of went on a tangent LOL but this is a topic I get kind of passionate about)

[Skai Rain]

It's all good. I am not one to judge xD

[NoelHC]

Well written, I enjoyed this. I do agree with the suggestions made by MomZ, although I think she meant to type "man", not "many"

[MomzillaNC]

Yes, I did mean "man" and have now corrected it. Thanks.

[Dannyisawriter]

thanks!!! :)

[MomzillaNC]

Powerful words and a strong testament of Faith.

NOTES: Pronouns for God are usually capitalized by the Faithful.
For poetic balance,
Unsure what about you wasn't right
You're not sure if you can restart
I recommend changing "So just because one man can't see what he's missing" to something like, "So, one man can't see what he's missing?"
He'll show you love you've never known

[iveltac]

ok i havent learned your style of poems yet but im working on it. do you have periods only at the end or not. Just wondering so i dont say other wise in my reviews.

i found no mistakes. Your poem is wondeful and it makes me think of many things. Keep up the good.

[Dannyisawriter]

I tend not to use periods in my poems. The only punctuation I use are question marks and exclamation points

[iveltac]

Ok just make sure that doesnt rubb off into you writings. :p thanks for telling me that now i know not to tell you to fix it :p.